英语四级写作高分训练月计划第一周：对比类5

　　五、每日佳作赏析
　　Directions : For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed ? You should write at least 120 words following the outline give below in Chinese :
　　1.有人做好事期望得到回报。
　　2.有人认为应该像雷锋那样做好事不图回报。
　　3.你的观点。

　　范文
　　Nowadays , (1) different people bold different veews about whether or not one should expect a reward when doing a good deed . Some people think that a good deed should be given a certain reward . They say it is agreeable with the rule of fairness . (2①) Also , rewards can stimulate people's enthusiasm to do good deeds .
　　(3)However , there are many others who take Leifeng as a model and be always ready to help others (4) without expecting any reward . Everyone may be in trouble . (5) Only if you help others unselfishly , you can get others' help when you need it . (2②) Besides , they maintain that one can enjoy happiness in doing good deeds , (6) they think , (7) which is the best return .
　　(8)Weighing up these two arguments , I prefer the second one . (2③) Frist , being happy to help others is one of Chinese people's traditiomal virtues . (2④) Second , this virtue (9) is of more significance for the creation of a harmonious society . (2⑤) To conclude , (10①) it is every citizen's responsibility (10②) to do good deeds without expecting any reward .