英语四级写作高分训练月计划第一周：观点类4

　　五、每日佳作赏析
　　Directions : For this part , you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Haste Makes Waste . You should write at least 120 words , and bese your composition on the outline given below in Chinese :
　　1.为什么说“欲速则不达”？
　　2.试举例说明。

　　范文
　　The proverb " Haste makes waste " has been widely accepted for many years . It reminds us that if we are to achieve our final goal we have to do it in a (1) down-to-earth way . (2) The truth of it is deep and profound .
　　(3) There are numerous examples supporting this argument . (4) A case in point is the ancient Chinese story of (5) " Helping the shoots grow by pulling ". This story proved that the haste caused not only waste but great loss . (6) For another example , some parents and teachers , (7①) in order to improve children's academic performance in a short time , tend to put too heavy burden on children . This , (7②) as a result , bring the children (8) nothing but great pressure .
　　(9) All the above-mentioned tells us that we shouldn't (10) be over anxious for quick results . Everything has its own (11) developing law . Therefore , (12) whatever we do , we should not pay too much attention to the speen and ignore these laws .