英语四级写作高分训练月计划第一周：叙事类2

　　三、结构公式真题演示
　　例（2005年6月）
　　Directions : For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay in honor of teachers on the occasion of Teacher's Day . You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese :
　　1.向老师致以节日祝贺。
　　2.从一件难忘的事回忆老师的教诲和无私的奉献。
　　3.我如何报答老师的关爱……

　　参考范文 Honor for My Teacher
　　(1) The once per year's Teacher's Day will come soon . (2) On this special occasion , all of us students should express our respect and love to our teachers . (3) And I especially want to take this opportunity to show my thanks to my dearest teacher , Mr.Li.
　　(4) There in one thing that is still vivid in my mind until now . (5) That was in 2001 , when the SARS was on . (6) Unfortunately , I was in hospital for a severe cold . (7) Though the doctor had proved I was just suffering from a normal cold , few students or teachers would like to come to see me . (8) However , Mr.Li came to see me every day and cared about me until I recovered .
　　(9) Every time I remind that experience , I feel deeply his unselfish love and devoting spirit . (10) I must return him with my practical actions . (11) I will , as he does , give others love and help when they are in tuouble . I believe that is what he expects me most .