英语四级写作高分训练月计划第三周：星期一（2）

　　二、用词原则

　　1.用词要简洁
　　能一个词表达清楚的意思，就不要加上多余的成分，另外还要注意不要造句成意义上的重复累赘。
　　如：
　　原句：What you have done is illegal under the law .
　　优化：What you have done is illegal .

　　2.用词要多样
　　注意不要一味地重复使用某个词汇，可适当转换成同义词或短语。也不要一味地使用同一种词性，要学会使用不同的词性。
　　如：
　　原句：This can definitely make them work more enthusiastically .
　　优化：This can definitely stimulate their working enthusiasm .

　　3.多用朴素、易懂的词
　　对考生来说，生僻或华丽的辞藻驾驭起来比较难，很容易使用不当，很多时候不但不能给文章增色，反而可能会使阅卷老师困惑，起到负面作用。因此，建议考生在写作时尽量选用自己熟悉的词语。
　　如：
　　原句：Parents in China always have altereations about their children's education .
　　优化：Parents in China always have quarrels about their children's education .

　　4.多用具体的词
　　如果词的概括性太强，往往让人觉得抽象、笼统，会给人模糊不清的感觉，词义比较具体的词会使表达更加准确、生动。
　　如：
　　原句：Some people like to read the newspaper very quickly and try to find some interesting stories .
　　优化：Some people like to flip through the newspaper and try to find some interesting stories .

　　5.注意使用限定词
　　当定作时适当使用限定词来修饰可以使论述更加客观、适度，避免观点的绝对化。
　　如：
　　In general , young people seem more prone to job-hopping .
　　Nowadays the increasingly severe employment situation is perhaps the biggest challenge facing college students .