英语四级写作高分训练月计划第三周：星期一（4）

　　四、每日佳作赏析
　　Directions : For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitles Say No to Pirated Products . You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese :
　　1.目前盗版的现象比较严重。
　　2.造成这种现象的原因及危害。
　　3.我们应该怎么做？

　　范文
　　Nowadays piracy (1) is becoming more and more of a problem in China . Almost any product , (2) such as tape , CD and hi-tech device , can be copied . (3) Shortly after a (4) newly-developed product is put on the market , people will (5) unsurprisingly find its pirated (6) counterparts in the stores .
　　(7①) It should be paid attention to that piracy causing great harm . (8①) On the one hand , pirated products often sell well (9①) due to their (10) unbeatable advantage in price (11) in spite of their relatively poor quality , and the orginal ones , (12) on the contrary , sell poorly . (8②) On the other hand , pirated products may also (13) have negative impacts on customers (14) since those legitimate producers' enthusiasm (7②) may be greatly hurt (9②) as a result of money loss . (8③) Therefore , (15) it is high time that we took measures to solve the problem (16) as soon as possible .
　　(8④) First of all , stricter laws and regulations should be (17) issued to punish piracy behaviors . (8⑤) Moreover , (18) as customers , we should (19) develop our consciousness to resist pirated products . (20) Only in this way can this problem be solved radically .

　　点评
　　(1)引出问题时常用的句式。
　　(2)插入语，表示列举。
　　(3)意为“……之后不久”。
　　(4)复合形容词，意为“新开发的”。
　　(5)副词使用恰当，意为“毫不令人惊奇地”。
　　(6)意为“相似之物”。
　　(7)被动语态使用恰当。
　　(8)衔接词语使文章条理清晰、意思连贯。
　　(9)表示原因的不同短语。
　　(10)意为“无可比拟的价格优势”。
　　(11)意为“尽管”。
　　(12)插入语，意为“相反”。
　　(13)意为“对……有负面影响”。
　　(14)since引导原因状语从句。
　　(15)引出解决办法时常用的句式，意为“该是……的时候了”。
　　(16)意为“尽可能快”。
　　(17)意为“发布，颁布”。
　　(18)介语短语开头。
　　(19)意为“培养我们……意识”。
　　(20)only+状语位于句首引出倒装。