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Top 1:社会热点专题 押题统计:新东方、陈正康、张剑、朱伟
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1.“共享”类话题       It can be clearly seen from the drawing that there are several kinds of shared activities(共享活动) that urban citizens are enjoying much. On a closer look, a boy is using his mobile phone to unlock a shared bike that is parked in right order.Moreover, there is a traveler-looking young man recharging his mobile phone at a shared charging station, and there are several readers focusing on books in a shared library.
      Commercial and non-profitable shared activities make the metropolitan life more convenient. Furthermore, the limited resources(有限的资源) in highly populated areas(人口密集的地区) can be reallocated (重新分配) and then utilized more efficiently. In effect, with human society evolving, the proportion of private property may gradually decrease to escape the heavy dependence on environment.
2、“低头族““手机病”       As is ironically shown in the picture..., Undoubtedly, the picture satirized an epidemic prevailing among youngsters, namely, phubber(低头族) or the smart phone syndrome.(手机病) As for me, it is a problem that deserves grave concern.(值得深切关注)
      Two reasons, as far as I'm concerned(在我看来), can be easily found to account for (解释)the phenomenon.
      As a result, the smart phone has attained enormous popularity and gradually become an indispensable part of our life.(我们生活中不可或缺的一部分)
      Eventually, the charm of the cell phone outshines the pleasure with friends and even makes parents forget their obligations.
      Besides the damage to the friendship, mobile phone syndrome can be disastrous in other ways.
      Thus it is most urgent for us to realize the harm of the syndrome and adopt every measure possible to reverse the condition.
3、"年轻人熬夜"问题       We, specially the teenagers, should develop good living habits.(养成良好的生活习惯) Having a good rest is the fundamental need, which ensures us a strong healthy body and a good mood. We should go to bed early and get up early.
      Staying up late(熬夜) is bad for our health.
      Besides, healthy eating habits(健康的饮食习惯)are of great importance, which leads to both physical and mental health.
      We should eat more fruits and vegetables instead of (代替,而不是)biscuit,hamburgers and meat. Junk food (垃圾食品)is a fatal killer of our health, so we should stay away from it.
4、“信任危机”       In the set of pictures above, suspecting the vegetables for sale aren't green food, a woman turns her back on(转身离开) the seller; doubting the credibility of advice from a self claimed expert dressed as a doctor, an old man turns away; a young man casts doubt on(产生怀疑)an officer who takes an oath of integrity(许下廉政诺言).The underlying meaning of the drawings can be elaborated in terms of loss of trust(信任缺失) among people.
      There was a time when doors were left unlocked at night (曾几何时,夜不闭户)and no one pocketed anything found on.
      However, with the development of the society, people increasingly distrust each other.
      This crisis of trust in our society will bring many unfavorable consequences.
      Trust is the glue of life. It's the most essential ingredient in effective communication. It s the fundamental principle that holds all relationships。(信任是生活的粘合剂。它是有效沟通的必备因素,也是维持所有关系的基本准则)
高分热文
Directions       Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the picture below. In your essay, you should
      1) describe the picture briefly,
      2) interpret its intended meaning, and
      3) give your comments.
      You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)
      As is ironically shown in the picture, a little boy's parents are both deeply addicted to the cell phone, while he is siting on the ground, crying alone. Undoubtedly, the picture satirized an epidemic prevailing among youngsters, namely, phubber,(低头族) or the smart phone syndrome.(手机病) As for me, it is a problem that deserves grave concern.(值得深切关注)
      Two reasons, as far as l'm concerned(在我看来), can be easily found to account for(解释)the phenomenon. First of all, the unprecedented boom in telecommunications technology has made it possible for us to get access to every conceivable piece of information and service. As a result, the smart phone has attained enormous popularity and gradually become an indispensable part of our life.(我们生活中不可或缺的一部分) Plus, the springing up of countless powerful socializing and game applications has also deteriorated the issue. It is quite common to see young people focusing on their phones under all circumstances, playing games and posting status.Eventually, the charm of the cell phone outshines the pleasure with friends and even makes parents forget their obligations.
      Besides the damage to the friendship, mobile phone syndrome can be disastrous in other ways. A student addicted to mobile phone may be distracted from his or her study ; parents playing mobile phone may neglect their child and cause serious results. Thus it is most urgent for us to realize the harm of the syndrome and adopt every measure possible to reverse the condition。
参考译文
      如图所示,一个小男孩的父母深深地沉迷于手机,留他独自坐在地上哭泣。毫无疑问,此图讽刺了如今年轻人中非常普遍的一种流行病,即低头族或手机病。我认为,这个问题值得我们深切关注。
      我认为,可以很容易地找到两个原因来解释这个现象。首先,通信技术前所未有的迅猛发展让我们能够轻易地接触到任何能够想象得到的信息和服务。因此,智能手机迅速得到普及,逐渐成为我们生活中不可或缺的一部分。其次,无数功能强大的社交和游戏应用也恶化了这一问题。现在在任何场合都可以经常看到年轻人专注地玩手机游戏或者发状态。最终,手机的魅力胜过了交友的乐趣,甚至使父母忘记了自己的责任。
      除了对友谊有害,手机病带来的危害还体现在其他地方。学生沉迷于手机游戏便会影响学习;父母玩手机可能会忽视他们的孩子,从而造成严重的后果。所以当务之急是要意识到手机病的危害,并采取一切可能的措施来扭转局面。
Top 2:哲理类专题 押题统计:新东方、朱伟、陈正康
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1、“没有行动,梦想只是空想”       The picture aims at revealing a simple truth: without action, any goal is just a fantasy.(没有行动,梦想只是空想)
      No one can deny the fact that taking action is extremely essential to achieving your goals.
      Only by turning your dream into action, can you really realize it.
      “The journey of a thousand miles starts with a single step. "(千里之行,始于足下)
       The more action we take, the more likely we are to accumulate experience, master skills and get close to our destination.
2、“逆境造人才”       As is shown in the picture, a sailor is steering a ship in a calm sea, which definitely would not arouse his faculties and fortitude.(平静的水面练就不出强悍的水手) That is why the caption reads“A smooth sea never makes a skilled sailor.”
      There is no denying the fact that it is rough times that make us grow faster.
      The home is their comfort zone, and the longer they stay there, the less likely they would be able to deal with life's storms.
      Just as a saying goes, greenhouse flowers cannot survive the unpleasant weather outdoors. (温室的花朵经不起外面的风雨)
      We should not be content with a life of ease.(不应该满足于安逸的生活)
      Instead we should be brave enough to take on new challenges to bring out the best in us(勇于接受挑战,成就最好的自己)
高分热文
Directions       Write an essay of 160 200 words based on the picture below. In your essay, you should
      1) describe the pictures briefly,
      2) interpret the intended meaning,and then
      3) give your comments.
      You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)
      As is vividly shown in the picture above, both young men want to be a famous singer. One man is sitting on the chair is daydreaming about the day when he gives a perfect concert to all his fans, while the other practices the guitar and his singing skill all day long. The picture aims at revealing a simple truth: without action, any goal is just a fantasy.(没有行动,梦想只是空想)
      No one can deny the fact that taking action is extremely essential to achieving your goals. Only by turning your dream into action, can you really realize it. If you never take action, you will never have a chance to win, Just as an old Chinese saying goes, "The journey of a thousand miles starts with a single step. "(千里之行,始于足下) The more action we take, the more likely we are to accumulate experience, master skills and get close to our destination.To further demonstrate the importance of taking action, I would like to take a famous fable as a case in point: the Foolish Old Man who dreamed of removing the mountain in front of his gate began with carrying away small stones and finally realized his dream.
      Consequently, I believe, on the one hand, government and the media should lose no opportunity to publicize the importance of taking action.(宣传行动的重要性) On the other hand, in our daily life, more than just thinking of something, we have to put it into action(付诸于行动中). Only by doing so, can we achieve our objective sand realize our dreams.
参考译文
      正如上图所生动展示的,两个年轻人都想成为歌星。一个坐在椅子上做白日梦,想着自己在举办一次完美的演唱会给粉丝听;而另一人整日苦练吉他和唱功。图画旨在揭示一个简单的道理:没有行动,任何目标都只是空想。
      采取行动对实现目标非常重要,没有人能够否认这一事实。只有把梦想付诸行动,梦想才能实现。如果从不采取行动,就永远没有成功的机会。正如中国的古语所说:“千里之行,始于足下”。我们采取的行动越多,就越有可能积累经验、掌握技能,并靠近自己的目标。为了进一步说明行动的重要性,我想列举一个著名的寓言故事-愚公移山作为例子。愚公想把自己家门口的大山移走,他从搬小石子开始,最终实现了梦想。
      因此,我认为,一方面,政府和媒体应该不失时机地宣扬行动的重要性。另一方面,在日常生活中,我们要付诸行动,而不只是空想。只有如此,我们才能达成目标并实现梦想。
Top 3:教育专题 押题统计:张剑、新东方
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1、师德       Unfolded before us is a cartoon simply drawn yet profoundly meaningful.
      teachers' ethics is essential(至关重要的) in the educational process.
      We can identify the significance of teachers' ethics from the following perspectives.
      To begin with, it will help students to acquire the basic personal qualities for their future life.
      Furthermore, teachers' ethics is a code of conduct that must be followed in the teaching process. Last but not least, teachers' ethics is also critical for a progressive and healthy development.
2、大学替课现象       The picture depicts...
      For many students, after years of preparation for the gruelling Gaokao, life gets much easier once they are at college where nearly everyone can graduate without having to be industrious.
高分热文
Directions       Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
      1) describe the drawing briefly,
      2) interpret the meaning, and
      3) give your comments.
      You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)
      The picture depicts a college classroom where a " ghost student" is paid to take the class for an absent student at the back row, but the teacher carrying on with his lecture seems to brush it aside.(不理会,漠视) This ironic scene is not rare in today’s universities.
      For many students, after years of preparation for the gruelling(折磨人的) Gaokao, life gets much easier once they are at college where nearly everyone can graduate without having to be industrious.(勤奋的) The lax academic standards, coupled with teachers' indulgence, undoubtedly turn universities into a hotbed of (......的温床)laziness-main incentive for students to skip classes(翘课) without excuse or hire someone to take their classes. Such laziness, if left as it is, could inevitably hold them back from(阻止某人做某事) acquiring expertise, adding to their difficulty with employment in this highly- competitive environment.
      Fortunately,more universities are tightening management up, after Huazhong University of Science and Technology downgraded 18 students from a bachelor's degree to an associate degree (专科学位)last year because they failed to met course requirements. However, lifting the academic bar(提高学术标准) alone will not be sufficient; it should be accompanied by education to raise students' awareness of self discipline After all. only by engaging in learning their own initiative (主动性,积极性)can students grasp true knowledge and become competitive life.
参考译文
      图片描绘了某个大学课堂,后排一一个缺勤的学生花钱请人替课,然而老师却对此置之不理、继续讲课。这一幕具有讽刺性的场景在当今大学校园并不少见。
      对于很多学生而言,经过多年备受折磨的高考备考,一旦进入大学,生活将会变得轻松不少,在大学不用勤奋学习几乎每个人都能毕业。这种宽松的学术标准,加上老师的纵容,无疑使大学成为滋生懒惰的温床一懒惰是学生无故翘课或雇人替课的主要动机。若放任不管,这种惰性势必会阻碍学生获取专业知识,增加他们在当下竞争激烈环境中的就业难度。
      好在去年华中科技大学将18名未达到课程要求的本科生学位降级为专科,此后越来越多的大学开始加强管理。但仅仅提高学术标准还不够,仍需通过教育来提高学生的自律意识。毕竟,只有主动参与到学习中,学生才能掌握真正的知识,在一生中拥有竞争力。
Top 4:环境类专题 押题统计:朱伟
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1、污染       Mobile phone usage in public places like hospitals can easily interfere(打扰) with the medical equipment, which can be harmful to the patient.
      在医院等公共场所使用手机很容易干扰医疗设备,这对病人有害。
      In my opinion, cell phones should be allowed in public places with some restrictions. What's more, in public places, quiet zones where phone use is banned should be set up.
      在我看来,应该允许在公共场所使用手机,并设有一此限制。此外,在公共场所,应该建立禁止使用手机的安静区域。
2、城市病       The unprecedented (空前的)expansion of cities undoubtedly leads to the excessive concentration of population, which in turn brings about a series of problems, such as environmental pollution, traffic jam, increased crimes and high housing prices.
      城市空前的扩张无疑造成人口的过度集中,这反过来又会产生一系列问题,如环境污染、交通堵塞、犯罪增多及高房价等。
      Therefore, the focus of urban authorities(市政部门) should be on consolidation and upgrading of urban infrastructure. Great attention should also be paid to develop a mechanism to monitor the carrying capacity(承受能力) of both resources and environment of cities to achieve urban layout optimization(布局优化).
      因此,市政部门应关注城市基础设施的整合和升级。还应该重点建立一种机制来监督城市资源和环境的承受能力,以达到城市布局最优化。
3、垃圾分类       Worse still, in many places, waste is disposed of(被处理) by burning, and burning the recyclable waste(可回收垃圾) like plastics will give off toxic(有毒的) smoke which pollutes the air.
      更糟糕的是,在很多地方,垃圾是通过焚烧来处理的,而焚烧诸如塑料之类的可回收垃圾会释放有毒气体,污染空气。
高分热文
Directions       Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
      1) describe the drawing briefly,
      2) interpret its intended meaning, and
      3) give your comments.
      You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)
      It can be clearly seen from the drawing that two people with the same dressing and environment- friendly bags are picking up rubbish on the mountain. In addition, the words below the drawing read : pick up rubbish while climbing the mountain, do physical exercise while protecting the environment.
      As we all know, the environmental issue has always been paid great attention to. It is closely related to our daily life and the sustainable development of the earth. As human beings,we are responsible for building a better home for generations to come. Picking up rubbish while climbing the mountain is a meaningful way. Both children and teenagers are able to take part in this meaningful activity. Through the joint efforts,(通过我们共同的努力) we can experience a low-carbon life(体验低碳生活), and protect and beautify the environment of a scenic spot(风景区) at the same time. What's more,more and more people are encouraged to take part in this meaningful activity.
      Strengthen environmental awareness(加强环保意识)and do our best to protect the environment. Be healthier while protecting the environment. What is there against it?
参考译文

      从漫画中能清晰地看到,有两个人穿着同样的服装,拿着环保袋在山上捡垃圾。此外,图片下面写着:登山捡垃圾,环保健身两不误。
      众所周知,环境问题一直受到人们的高度重视。它与我们的日常生活和地球的可持续发展密切相关。作为人类,我们有责任为后代建设一个更美好的家园。爬山时捡垃圾是一种有意义的方式。孩子和青少年都能参与其中。通过共同努力,我们可以体验低碳生活,同时保护和美化景区环境。另外,现在越来越多的人被鼓励参加这个有意义的活动。
      加强环保意识,尽最大努力保护环境。保持健康的同时保护环境。何乐而不为?
Top 5:经济类专题 押题统计:张剑
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      Obviously, the drawing is aimed at...
      This product of the digital age is without doubt a double -edged sword.
      Given the pros and cons mentioned above, the public should have a clear understanding of this kind G marketing campaigns and their real needs.
      It is an effective way to boost domestic consumption and economic growth.
高分热文
Directions       Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
      1) describe the drawing briefly,
      2) explain its intended meaning, and
      3) give your comments.
      You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)
      Almost out of a computer screen, three salespeople are advertising a discount with great enthusiasm. What they are carrying in their hands are lanterns, on which a Chinese character meaning" festival" is written.
      Obviously, the drawing is aimed at turning the spotlight on a social trend that online shopping sites in China have turned seemingly countless ordinary days. far more than the well- known November 11th and June 18th, into shopping carnivals. This product of the digital age is without doubt a double -edged sword.(这一数字时代的产物无疑是把双刃剑)On the one hand, it is an effective way to boost domestic consumption and economic growth. It has also injected competition into the e commerce sector, encouraging online platforms and stores, as well as logistics companies, to keep improving their services. On the other hand, an excessive number of such events will promote a culture of consumerism. Some people may be prone to make irrational purchase decisions when there are numerous tempting coupons provided by e-commerce platforms and online sellers.
      Given the pros and cons mentioned above,(考虑到上述提到的利弊) the public should have a clear understanding of this kind of marketing campaigns and their real needs. In addition, online stores must focus more on enhancing their brand image instead of fighting a vicious price war.
参考译文
      三位销售人员正热情洋溢地宣传打折信息,几乎快钻出电脑屏幕。他们手上提着灯笼,上面写着中文的“节”。
      显然,这幅图意在提醒人们关注中国的在线购物网站已将似乎无数个平凡的日子(远多于为人熟知的双11和618)变成了“购物狂欢节”这一社会趋势。这一数字时代的产物无疑是把双刃剑。一方面,它能有效地促进国内消费和经济发展。它还为电子商务行业带来了竞争,促使网络平台、网店以及物流公司不断提升服务质量。另一方面,这类活动数量过多会催生消费主义文化。在电商平台和网店提供大量诱人优惠券的情况下,有人可能会轻易做出不理智的购买决定。
      鉴于上述利弊,公众应该对这类营销活动和自身真实需求有清楚的认知。此外,网店要更加注重提升自身的品牌形象,而不是打恶性价格战。
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