英语四级写作高分训练月计划第一周：说明现象类3

　　五、每日佳作赏析
　　Directions:For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled . The Celebration of Western Festivals . You shoule write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese :
　　1.现在国内有不少人喜欢过西方的某些节日。
　　2.产生这种现象的原因。
　　3.这种现象可能带来的影响。

　　范文
　　In recent years many Chinese people like to celebrate western festivals . Even some youngsters are paying (1①) as great attention to Christmas (1②) as our Spring Festival . (2①) In addition , other western festivals , like April Fool's day and Valentine's Day , are very popular among Chinese people .
　　(3)Many reasons contribute to this pheno-menon . Among them , relaxing and comfortable atmosphere from westem festivals plays a crtitcal role . (2②)Moreover , more and more Chinese people begin to leam English , (4)which provides them with more chances to (5) be exposed to westm culture and festivals . (2③) Besides , many businessmen desperatcly try to boost the atmosphere of foreign festivals to attract more customers .
　　(6)As far as I am concemed , our paying too much attention to western festivals will (7) bring some side effects . The popularity of western festivals (8) to some extent has influence our traditions . (2④) Therefore , I suggest that people should (9①) not (10) be immersed too much in the western festivals (9②) but ingore Chinese traditional festivals .