英语四级写作高分训练月计划第三周：星期四（7）

　　七、亮点词语改写练习
　　1.I'd like to make every effort to let more people know the idea that waste is disgraceful , and call on all my schoolmates to fight against waste .(用更动态的动词改写)
　　2.I'm sure you will soon find a good candidate for the position in that a few people are more suitable for it than I .(用更具体的词替换)
　　3.People who are good at dealing with social relations admit their mistakes , and take their share of blame .(用介词短语改写)
　　4.That capital punishmen being abolished will benefit the harmony of the society .(用不同的词性改写)
　　5.If students develop the habit of waste , it will undoubtedly become a heavy hurden on their parents .(用更动态的动词改写)
　　6.Above all , it teaches us that we shouldn't have a strong wish to get quick results .(用更具体的短语替换)
　　7.We shall only follow those conceptions that will contribute to the social development .(用不同的词性改写)
　　8.Opponents say capital punishment does not effect murder rates , but only arouses unhealthy interest in executions .(用恰当的近义词替换)
　　9.If we combine all people's knowledge , we can bring out a better solution as soon as possible .(用介词短语改写)
　　10.However , though celebrities are glamorous , they lead very stressful lives .(加上限定词，使表达更加客观)
　　11.Nuclear proliferation is always the top problem the participants have to discuss at this kind of meeting .(用恰当的近义词替换)
　　12.For one thing , celebrities don't own the privacy an ordinary person has .
　　13.College students cannot strike a balance between study and their part-time jobs .(加上限定词，使表达更加客观)

　　参考答案
　　1.I'd like to make very effort to publicize the idea that waste is disgraceful , and call on all my schoolmates to fight against waste .
　　2.I'm sure you will soon find a well-qualified candidate for the position in that a few people are more suitable for it than I .
　　3.People with skill in social relations admit their mistakes , and take their share of blame .
　　4.The abolishment of capital punishment will benefit the harmony of the society .
　　5.If students develop the habit of waste , it will undoubtedly burden their parents heavily .
　　6.Above all , it teaches us that we shouldn't be over-anxious for quick results .
　　7.We shall only follow those contributive conceptions to the social development .
　　8.Opponents say capital punishment does not affect murder rates , but only arouses unhealthy interest in executions .
　　9.With the combination of all people's knowledge , we can bring out a better solution as soon as possible .
　　10.However , though to some extent celebrities are glamorous , most of them lead very stressful lives .
　　11.Nuclear proliferation is always the top issue the participants have to discuss at this kind of meeting .
　　12.For one thing , celebrities don't have the privacy an ordinary person has .
　　13.College students , for the most part , cannot strike a balance between study and their part-time jobs .
　　14.The team can be helpful with my questions and problems , thus increasing my work efficiency.