2016考研英语（二）大作文真题解析及参考范文

　　（一）大作文真题：
　　Section IV    Writing
　　48.Directions:
　　Write an essay based on the following chart. you should
　　1）interpret the chart and
　　2）give your comments.
　　You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.(15 points).
　　
　　　　某高校学生旅游目的调查

　　（二）作文解析
　　今年英语二作文的题目比较好写，因为标题和图示非常清晰明白。图表显示了某高校学生旅游目的调查,考生分析原因的话也会很简单。下面分三段简要地说一下这三段应该怎么写。
　　第一段主要是描述图表。图表一目了然，数量词百分比也是大家熟悉的词汇，表述数据时，图中有四五组数据，由于字数的限制以及为了写作的便利可以突出较大比例的"欣赏风景"和"缓解压力"，注意引入百分比的表达方式。
　　第二段给出你的评论，主要写这种情况的原因。主要要结合图表描述的内容从两个方面写起。一方面为什么为了欣赏风景而旅行的目的占37%，另一方面为什么缓解压力会占到33%比例。
　　最后结尾段落可简要得出结论，这种现象并不奇怪，还将继续下去。

　　（三）参考例文：

　　As is clearly reflected in the above pie chart, the purpose of students travelling abroad demonstrates obvious differences in one college of China. According to the data given, the purpose of enjoying the beautiful landscape takes a comparatively large share, accounting for 37%, while that of relieving pressure also takes away 20% of the whole proportion.

　　What triggers this phenomenon? It is not difficult to put forward several factors responsible for this phenomenon. To start with, with the rapid economic development of economy, people, including college students, are becoming increasingly wealthy, which enables them to afford the once-deemed- expensive oversea traveling. In order to enjoy the charming landscape all around the world, a large proportion of students choose to travel abroad. What’s more, along with the ever-accelerating improvement of economy and society is also the ever-increasing work and life pressure. Consequently, the purpose of relieving pressure ranks the second among all the purposes for folks to travel around the world.

　　In view of the arguments above, we can conclude that the current phenomenon is of no surprise. And therefore, it can be predicted that admiring the scenery and alleviating pressure will still be the main purpose for people to arrange a traveling to other countries.

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