考研帮-英语一高频命题（小作文）

Top 1：建议信 押题统计：张剑、新东方、陈正康

述相关表述: 1、提出建议       I would like to suggest that ……
      I am writing with great sincerity to make suggestions to ……
      Here are some tips for you as follows ……
      I am writing this letter to raise some suggestions to ……
      To begin with, I would like to suggest that ……; 2、结语/期盼回复       Thanks for your reading and we hope you can take these suggestions seriously and make improvements.
      Thanks for your time and consideration.
      I hope you will find the above proposals conductive.

热高分热文: 1、Directions       Write a letter to the library in your university,making suggestions for improvement.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET2.
      Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use "Li Ming" instead.
      Do not write the address.(10 points); 2、范文; Dear Sir/Madam,
      I am a newcomer in our university and I am writing with great sincerity to make some suggestions to improve the service and environment in our library.
      First, it seems that our library does not provide enough seats for students to take in the reading room because I see lots of students standing there reading many times. Second, the instructions for where we can get the needed materials copied are not clear so it is advised that you post the directions at the gate of the library. Third, the notice for when the borrowed books are due can be sent to the students by e-mail or WeChat so that we may learn the information in no time（立即）.
      Thank you for your reading and we hope you can take these suggestions seriously and make improvements. I am looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming

译精彩翻译: 尊敬的先生/女士：
      我是我们学校的一名新生，我真诚地想提些建议来提高学校图书馆的服务和环境。
      首先，图书馆没有给学生提供足够的座位，因为我多次看到很多学生在阅览室里站着阅读。其次，到何处取复印资料的指示并不清楚，所以我建议在图书馆门口张贴指示。第三，图书到期通知可以通过邮件或者微信方式告知学生，这样就能即刻了解信息。
      谢谢您的阅读，希望您能重视这些意见并作出改善。期待您的回复。
敬启
 李明

Top 2 道歉信 押题统计：张剑、新东方、何凯文、陈正康

述相关表述: 1、表示歉意       I would like to apologize to you for ……
      I feel terribly sorry for ……
      I am very sorry for ……; 2、说明具体原因、提出补救方法 If it is convenient for you, shall we ……; 3、再次致歉并希望得到理解       Please accept my apology for ……
      I feel extremely sorry about it and hope you can accept my sincere apology.
      I am truly sorry for any inconvenience that my action might have caused

热高分热文: 1、Directions       What you did at school has offended your teacher.Write a letter of apology of about 100 words to your teacher for your misconduct.
      You should include the details you think necessary.
      You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.
      Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use "Li Ming" instead.
      Do not write the address.(10 points); 2、范文; Dear Mr. Wang,
      I am very sorry for what I did the other day. In hindsight（事后）, my actions were extremely childish, disruptive and disrespectful for you, my peers and the school.
      You can expect better and more appropriate behavior from me in the future. I have learned from this experience and understood that a certain level of refrainment and professionalism is expected of me in the classroom.
      I recognize your dedication（奉献） to education and your commitment（投入、奉献） to instill（灌输） in me the knowledge I need to succeed. I hope our relationship is undamaged by my actions and that I can continue to learn and grow under your guidance.
Sincerely,
Li Ming

译精彩翻译: 亲爱的王老师：
      对于我那天的行为，深表抱歉。事后看来，我的行为很幼稚，捣乱，对您和同学们以及学校来说，也很不尊敬。
      在未来，您可以要求我做得更好、更正确。从这次经历中我也认识到在课堂上我需要表现得有一定克制和专业性。
      我认识到了您在教育中的敬业和向学生灌输知识的投入与奉献。希望我们的关系没有被我的行为所破坏。我也会在您的指导下不断学习成长。
真挚的
 李明

Top 3 申请信 押题统计：张剑、新东方、何凯文、陈正康

述相关表述: 1、申请原因 I am writing to ask for admission to ……
I am eager to do my bit（尽我的微绵之力） in ……; 2、表示感谢 I would be grateful if you could grant me an interview.
Enclosed（附上） please find two letters of recommendation（推荐信） and my resume.

热高分热文: 1、Directions       You want to be a volunteer for the World Cultural Heritage Preservation Forum.Write a letter to the department concerned to state why you want to be a volunteer.
      You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET.
      Do not sign your name at the end of the letter.Use "Li Ming" instead.
      Do not write the address.(10 points); 2、范文; Dear Sir or Madam,
      I’m writing to express my wish to volunteer for the World Cultural Heritage Preservation Forum, and I would like to apply to be a qualified candidate.
      Given my keen（强烈的） interest in history, I have visited many cultural heritage sites. The travel experiences have instilled in（灌输） me an awareness that cultural heritage, as an essential part of our cultural identity（文化认同）, is fragile（脆弱的） in nature and once destroyed cannot be recovered. Therefore, I’m eager to do my bit（尽自己的一份力量） in preserving the world’s cultural heritage.
      I would be most grateful if you could grant me an interview. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming

译精彩翻译: 尊敬的先生或女士：
      我写信是为了表达我想成为世界文化遗产保护论坛做志愿者工作的愿望，我想申请做一名合适的候选人。
      出于对历史的浓厚兴趣，我参观过许多文化遗址。这些旅行经历为我注入了一种意识：文化遗产，作为我们文化认同的重要部分，本质上是脆弱的、一旦被破坏就无法恢复。因此，我渴望为保护世界文化遗产尽自己的一份力量。
      如果您能给我一个面试的机会，我将万分感谢。感谢您的时间与关注。
诚挚的，
李明

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TOP 4 询问信 押题统计：张剑、新东方、何凯文、陈正康

述相关表述: I would be grateful if you could be kind enough to provide me with certain essential information.
I am writing to ask for information about ……

热高分热文: 1、Directions       You are going to study in an American university.Write a letter to introduce yourself briefly and inquire about the related informations.
      You should write about 100 words nearly on the ANSWER SHEET.
      Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use "Zhang Wei" instead.
      Do not write the address.(10 points); 2、范文; Dear Sir or Madam,
      I am a Chinese student and plan to pursue further study next semester at your prestigious（有声望的） university.I would be grateful if you could be kind enough to provide me with certain essential information.
      To begin with, what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your university? I already have a bachelor’s degree from Tsinghua University, but I wonder if there are any further academic requirements. In addition, how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self-supporting, I would be interested to hear if there are any scholarships available for international students. Finally, what is the situation concerning accommodation?
      I am looking forward to your reply, and to attending your esteemed（受尊敬的） institution.
Sincerely yours,
Zhang Wei

译精彩翻译: 尊敬的先生/女士：
      我是一名中国学生，计划下学期前往贵校深造。如果您能好心提供给我一些必要的信息，我将不胜感激。
      首先，要在贵校学习课程需要具备哪些资格？我已经获得清华大学的学士学位，但是否有更高的学历要求？另外，学费是多少？尽管我打算自费，但很有兴趣了解留学生是否会有奖学金。最后，住宿情况怎么样？
      期待您的答复，也盼望进入贵校。
敬启
 张伟

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TOP 5 邀请信 押题统计：张剑、新东方、何凯文、陈正康

述相关表述: 1、邀请目的
On behalf of ……, I have the honor to invite you to ……
To enrich the school life of …… and to ……, XXX will be held by … on …; 2、活动安排
The activity will be held in ……
The contest will be made up of two phases.; 3、结语
We look forward to seeing you at this festive occasion and share the joy of the new year.
We look forward to your participation.

热高分热文: 1、Directions       Please write an invitations letter of about 100 words to your classmates to the New Year party.
      You should include the details you think necessary.
      You should write nearly on the ANSWER SHEET.
      Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use "Li Ming" instead.
      Do not write the address.(10 points); 2、范文; Dear classmates,
      Our school is holding a New Year party on December 30th at 3:00 PM and would like you to attend it.
      The New Year party will be held in Classroom 101. We request you to bring one food item to share and enjoy with other classmates this day. Please note that we do not want to put you through the trouble of cooking or spending an exorbitant（极高的）amount of money on food items; if you can bring just enough for yourself, it will suffice for the food exchange activity.
      We look forward to seeing you at this festive occasion and to share the joy of the new year.
Regards,
Li Ming

译精彩翻译: 亲爱的同学们：
      学校将于12月30日下午3点举行新年派对，希望大家能参加。
      新年派对将在101教室举办。请大家带上一种食物和同学们分享。请注意不需要费力自己做或者买很多钱买食物。如果你带的食物足够自己吃，也就足够进行食物交换活动了。
      期待在此佳节之际见到你，一起分享新年的快乐。
真挚的
 李明

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TOP 6 投诉信 押题统计：张剑、新东方、何凯文、陈正康

述相关表述: 1、说明投诉问题       I am writing to inform（告知）you that I find…unsatisfactory…
      I am writing to express dissatisfaction/ disappointment/ concern regarding …
      I am writing because I need to complain to you about ……; 2、期待解决方案 I strongly request that a satisfactory explanation should be given.
I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.

热高分热文: 1、Directions       On your way from Beijing to Paris,you lost your luggage carried by the airline.Write a complaint letter to the service center of the Airline.In your letter,you should tell them
      1) what happened to your luggage,
      2) what your luggage is like,and
      3) what compensation you expect.
      You should write about 100 words nearly on the ANSWER SHEET.
      Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use "Li Ming" instead.
      Do not write the address.(10 points); 2、范文; Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing because I need to complain to you about what happened to my luggage carried by your airlines. On Sunday, June 2, 2014, I traveled on your airlines from Beijing to Paris. When I went to pick up（取，拿）my luggage in Paris, I was informed that it was missing. The lost luggage is a black suitcase, 50cm in length and 30 cm in width, in which there are five volumes of valuable research papers. If they cannot be found for me, I am sure that you will agree to pay me 1,000yuan, the estimated worth（估计价值） of my luggage on my claim ticket, to compensate for my great loss.
I have always enjoyed the good service of your airlines, and I look forward to receiving the same kind of good service in this matter.
Sincerely,
Li Ming

译精彩翻译: 尊敬的先生/女士：
我写这封信是要抱怨我的行李箱在你公司飞机上出现的状况。2014年6月2号，星期日，我乘坐你公司的航班从北京飞到巴黎。当我去取行李的时候被告知它丢失了。丢失的行李是一个黑色的手提箱，50厘米长，30厘米宽，里面有五册宝贵的研究论文。如果找不到，我确信你们会同意赔偿理赔票上行李的估价值1000元来弥补我重大的损失。
我一直很享受贵公司良好的服务。也期待在这件事上受到同样良好的服务。
诚挚的
 李明