2016考研英语书信作文：这里有你努力的方向！

　　▶5-7分
　　▶第一篇
　　Dear Pro. Smith,
　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your assistance. If it had not been for your assistance in sending timely the list of reference books which I asked for, I fear that I would have not been achieved my essay on the deadline.
　　Everyone agrees that it was you who save munch valuable time for me to search the reference books in the library and these reference books which are rather professional conform to the requirements of my essay. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
　　                                                                                                        Yours sincerely,
　　                                                                                                              Li Ming
　　修改意见：
　　Dear Pro. Smith,
　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your assistance. If it had not been for your assistance in sending timely(删掉)the list of reference books(加to me timely) which I asked for, I fear that I would have not been achieved my essay on(改为by ) the deadline.
　　Everyone agrees that it was you who save(改为saved) munch (拼写错误，改为much)valuable time for me to search the reference books in the library and these reference books which are rather professional conform to the requirements of my essay. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
　　                                                                                                          Yours sincerely,
　　                                                                                                                 Li Ming
　　6分
　　微点评：写作文时要再细心一些，尽量避免单词拼写的错误。时态要保持前后一致。

　　▶第二篇
　　Dear Bob,
　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your warm reception in this travel abroad. If it had not been for your assistance in this traveling that you are as a guide for me, I fear that I would have been lost so that I cannot find the way coming back.
　　Everyone agrees that it was you who patiently guide me to every tourist attractions and explain some of peculiar stories about sceneries. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
　　                                                                                                      Yours sincerely,
　　                                                                                                             Li Ming
　　修改意见：
　　Dear Bob,
　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your warm reception in this travel (改为in the journey)abroad. If it had not been for your assistance in this traveling (改为on the trip)that you are as a guide for me, I fear that I would have been lost so that I cannot(改为couldn’t) find the way coming back.
　　Every one agrees that it was you who patiently guide(改为guided) me to every tourist attractions and explain some of peculiar stories about sceneries. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
　　                                                                                                         Yours sincerely,
　　                                                                                                                 Li Ming
　　6分
　　微点评：作文写得还不错，但应保持时态的前后一致以及固定搭配。

　　▶第三篇
　　Dear Teacher,
　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your ongoing patience and selfless care. If it had not been for your assistance in our English study, I fear that I would have been failed my CET4 and CET6.
　　Even one agrees that it was you who has always been devoting most of your free time to day to day English teaching and instruction in test-taking skills. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
　　                                                                                                   Yours sincerely,
　　                                                                                                           Li Ming
　　修改意见：
　　Dear Teacher,
　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your ongoing patience and selfless care. If it had not been for your assistance in our English study, I fear that I would have been failed(改为failing)(加to pass) my CET4 and CET6.
　　Even one agrees that it was you who has(改为 had) always been devoting most of your free time to day to day English teaching and instruction(改为instructing) in test-taking skills. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
　　                                                                                                     Yours sincerely,
　　                                                                                                            Li Ming
　　7分
　　微点评：作文没有什么大问题，但是要注意时态的一致以及某些句型的固定用法。

　　▶第四篇
　　Dear sir,
　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your kindness to lend me the umbrella. If it had not been for your assistance in lending the umbrella to me when it was raining，I fear that I would have been in trouble to get home.
　　Every one agrees that it was you who always helping others in trouble. Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
　　                                                                                                          Yours sincerely
　　修改意见：
　　Dear sir,
　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your kindness to lend me the umbrella. If it had not been for your assistance in lending the umbrella to me when it was raining，I fear that I would have been in trouble to get home.
　　Every one agrees that it was you who always helping(改为 helped) others in trouble. Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
　　                                                                                      Yours sincerely(加逗号)
　　                                                                                                    加名字
　　5分
　　微点评：小作文的字数要求是100词，不要少于100词，否则是要扣分的。书信的写作格式要牢记于心。要注意时态的一致性。虽然作文没有什么大问题，但内容过于简单，其实你可以把内容再扩充一下，用一些高级的词汇和句型。

　　▶第五篇
　　Dear Ms. Wang,
　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your kindness help last week. If it had not been for your assistance in bringing me my admission card for examination in time, I fear that I would have been missed the opportunity to be a servant in the government which I have prepared for a long time.
　　Every one agrees that it was you who are my deliverer to save me from such troublesome situation. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
　　                                                                                                    Yours sincerely,
　　                                                                                                             Li Ming
　　修改意见：
　　Dear Ms. Wang,
　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your kindness(改为kind) help last week. If it had not been for your assistance in bringing me my admission card for examination in time, I fear that I would have been missed(改为missing) the opportunity to be a servant in the government which I have prepared for a long time.
　　Every one agrees that it was you who are(改为were) my deliverer to save me from such troublesome situation. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
　　                                                                                                       Yours sincerely,
　　                                                                                                             Li Ming
　　6分
　　微点评：写作文时要再认真一点，写完后再检查一遍，有些小错就可以及时改正，另外，建议你去看一下虚拟语气的句型。时态要保持一致。