考研帮-英语一高频命题（小作文）

Top 1：建议信 押题统计：张剑、新东方、何凯文、陈正康

述相关表述: 1、提出建议       I'd like to suggest that…
      May I suggest that…
      Could you please…
      Why don’t we…
      In my opinion…
      I feel that it would be beneficial if …; 2、期盼回复 I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making anyway.
I hope you will find these suggestions/proposals/recommendations（建议） helpful/practical/useful（有帮助的，实用的）.

热高分热文: To whom it may concern,
      Recent years have witnessed（见证） travel boom during public holidays, which brings with it some problems. Thus, I'm writing this letter to raise some suggestions（提出建议） to ease（缓解） the overcrowdedness in some famous tourist destinations during holidays.
      To begin with, I would like to suggest that National Tourism Administration offer online ticket-booking service（网络订票服务） for popular scenic spots. The number of tickets booked cannot exceed（超出） the number of tourists these scenic spots may hold. Moreover, I believe if National Tourism Administration accurately and promptly releases travel-related information（发布旅游相关信息） during holidays using various channels of communication, tourists would better arrange their journeys.
      Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Zhang Wei

译精彩翻译: 敬启者:
      近年来，公共假期出现了旅游热，这也带来了一些问题。因此，我写这封信是想提出一些建议，来缓解假期一些著名景点人满为患的问题。
      首光，我建议国家旅游局针对一些热门景点提供网络订票服务。所预定门票的数量不能超过这些景点所能容纳的人数。另外，我认为国家旅游局可充分利用各种传播渠道，准确、及时地发布假期旅游相关信息，以便游客更好地安排出游路线。
      谢谢您能抽出时间阅读此信并考虑我的建议。
敬启
 张伟

Top 2 申请信 押题统计：张剑、新东方、何凯文、陈正康

述相关表述: 1、申请原因 My major interests are… , and I understand your university has a good program in those fields.
I feel the need to study further in order to develop my potential in this field.; 2、表示感谢       If my application could be taken into favorable consideration, I would be most grateful.
      I hope you will kindly send me an application（申请单） form.
      I would greatly appreciate receiving copies of the required application forms（申请表格） and any instructions（说明） you may be so kind to give me regarding my possible admission.
      Enclosed（附上） are my score reports on all subjects and two recommendations（推荐信）.

热高分热文: To whom it may concern,
      I am writing this letter to apply for the position as a secretary of the office. My previous working experience and score list in the university can prove my potential to be a qualified secretary.
      I will graduate from Tsinghua university in July this year. I have studied in the university as a law major for 4 years and I have studied English and Business as my second and third majors. In addition, I have rich experience in（丰富的经验） the office work because I have worked as a part-time secretary in the Y Company for 2 years. My rich working experience and strong teamwork spirit（丰富的工作经验和强烈的团队合作精神） will enable me to perform better than other candidates who lack working experience.
      I really appreciate your consideration of my application for the post. And I am looking forward to your reply and interview at your convenience.
Sincerely yours,
Zhang Wei

译精彩翻译: 敬启者:
      我写这封信是为申请办公室秘书一职。我先前的工作经验以及在学校里的成绩可以证明我有能力担任秘书一职。
      我将在今年七月份于清华大学毕业。大学四年我主修法律，英语和商务分别是我的第二专业和第三专业。此外，我有丰富的办公室工作经验。我在Y公司兼职做了两年的秘书。我有丰富的工作经验和强烈的团队精神，会比缺乏工作经验的求职者表现得更出色。
      非常感谢您考虑我对这一职位的申请。期盼您尽早给予答复和安排面试。
敬启
 张伟

Top 3 投诉信 押题统计：张剑、新东方、何凯文、陈正康

述相关表述: 1、说明投诉问题 I am writing to inform（告知，代替tell）you that I find…unsatisfactory…
I am writing to express/air dissatisfaction/disappointment/concern regarding …; 2、期待解决方案       I hope you will take steps to rectify（纠正、改善，代替improve） this situation soon.
      I believe you will take my complaints seriously. I would ask you to give back my money, or I would file my complaint（投诉） to the authorities concerned（相关部门）.
      To solve this problem/surmount this difficulty/improve the situation/crack this hard nut（解决问题）, I hope to draw the attention of the authorities concerned.

热高分热文: Dear Sir or Madam,
      As one of the regular customers of your online store, I am writing this letter to express my complaint about the flaws of the electronic dictionary I bought from your shop last week.
      I must explain the reasons for my dissatisfaction. One the one hand, when I opened it for the first time, I did not find the battery promised（承诺的） in the advertisement posted on the homepage of your shop. On the other hand, some of the keys on the keyboard cannot work properly, which is beyond my tolerance（不能容忍）. I strongly request that a satisfactory explanation（满意的解释） be given and effective measures should be taken to improve your service and the quality of your products. I would be grateful if you could send me a replacement and refund my postage.
      I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Sincerely yours,
Zhang Wei

译精彩翻译: 尊敬的先生或女士：
      作为你们网店的一名常客，我写信时为表达对于上周从你们商店买的电子词典中存在的瑕疵的不满。
      我必须解释下我不满的原因。一方面，当我第一次打开它时，我并没有找到你们网店张贴的广告中许诺赠送的那块电池。另一方面，键盘上的一些按钮并不好用，这已经超出我的忍耐度了。我强烈地要求给我一个满意的解释,并且给出有效的解决措施以提高你们的服务水平和商品质量。如果你们能换货并且报销邮费的话我将不胜感激。
      我期待尽快得到您的回复。
敬启
 张伟

TOP 4 感谢信 押题统计：张剑、新东方、何凯文、陈正康

述相关表述: 1、表示感谢       I warmly appreciate your hospitality（款待）.
      I am writing to express my thanks for…
      I am writing to extend my sincere/hearty gratitude/appreciation（真诚的感谢）for…; 2、说明事由 Thank you very much for the gift you sent me. It's one of the most wonderful gifts I got on my birthday.
I am writing this letter to thank you for your warm hospitality accorded to me and my delegation during our recent visit to your beautiful country. I would also like to thank you for your interesting discussion with me which I have found very informative and useful.; 3、再次表示感谢 Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Thanks again and I hope that I will have the opportunity to return/repay your kindness.

热高分热文: Dear John,
      I would like to convey this letter my heartfelt thanks（表达衷心的感谢） to you for looking after me after that unfortunate accident. I'm referring to the day when I was knocked down by a taxi.
      If it had not been your assistance in（如果不是你的帮助） giving me first aid and taking me to a nearby hospital, I fear that（恐怕） the consequences might have been much more serious. However, with your help, the doctor says that my broken leg is healing well. In addition, the taxi company has agreed to pay my hospital bills. Everyone agrees that it was your quick-witted response in that emergency that has led to this satisfactory outcome.
      Although nowadays many people talk about the need to be unselfish and to help others, we see very few people practicing what they preach. But you showed by your actions that you are an exception. I must thank you again for your generous help（慷慨的帮助）.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming

译精彩翻译: 亲爱的约翰：
      我想借这封信向你表达最衷心的感谢，感谢你在那天的事故后对我的照顾，当时我被一辆出租车撞倒。
      如果没有你帮我急救并带我去附近的医院,我担心后果会更加严重。然而，有了你的帮助，医生说我的腿恢复得很好。此外，出租汽车公司已同意支付我的医疗费用, 大家都认为正是由于你在紧急情况下的机智反应，才有了这一令人满意的结果。
      虽然如今很多人在讲要无私地帮助别人,我们看到的却是很少有人言行一致，但你的行动表明，你是个例外。我必须再次感谢你的慷慨相助。
敬启
 李明

TOP 5 邀请信 押题统计：张剑、新东方、何凯文、陈正康

述相关表述: 1、邀请目的
      On behalf of… , I have the honor to invite you to…（我代表…,很荣幸邀请您）
      It is with the great pleasure that I write to cordially invite you to…
      It gives me the greatest pleasure to invite you to…
      We should be very grateful if you could…; 2、活动安排
There will be a dinner party to be held at（晚宴聚会将在……举行） the Beijing Hotel on Sunday, October 10th, at eight o'clock. Will you and Mrs. Smith come and join us?
I hope that you have no previous engagement and can join us for the English Evening at 7:00 p.m. on February 1st.; 3、期盼回复
      We are looking forward to seeing you.
      I do hope that you will be able to come.
      We should be very pleased if you could honor us with your company.（贵公司如能赏光,我们将不胜荣幸。）

热高分热文: Dear Professor Wang,
      I am greatly honored to invite you to the Conference of English Language Teaching, which will be held（在……举行） on December 10, 2016 at the School of Foreign Languages, Peking University.
      At the conference we will discuss various problems in English language teaching as well as further cooperation between two departments. We hope you can give us your advice about these aspects in the meeting. Since you are a very experienced professor in English language teaching, your speech will surely enrich our knowledge in this field.
      We sincerely hope you can attend the conference（出席会议）. Hope to hear from you at your earliest convenience.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming

译精彩翻译: 亲爱的王教授：
      我很荣幸地邀请您出席将于2016年12月10日在北京大学外国语学院举行的英语教学研讨会。
      在研讨会上我们将探讨英语教学中存在的各种问题以及我们两系之问的进一步合作事项。我们希望在这次会议中您能就这些方面告知我们您的观点或建议。因为您是一位在英语教学方面非常有经验的教授，您的发言无疑将丰富我们在这一领城的知识。
      我们真诚地期待您能出席。希望在您方便的时间尽快得到您的回复。
敬启
 李明

TOP 6 道歉信 押题统计：张剑、新东方、何凯文、陈正康

述相关表述: 1、表示歉意       I'm writing this letter to express my regret for…
      I'm writing to apologize for…
      Please accept my sincere apology for…
      I am terribly sorry, but…
      I regret to inform you that I am unable to…; 2、说明具体原因、提出补救办法       The reason is that…
      Would you mind if I change the appointment time?
      Would it be convenient for you… ?; 3、再次致歉并希望得到理解       Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.
      Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
      I am sorry to have put you to so much trouble.

热高分热文: Dear Bob,
      I am writing to apologize for having forgotten to return "the Beatles" CD to you when I left Canada. I was in such a hurry（着急） that I packed everything in my luggage without checking carefully. Had I paid more attention then, I wouldn't have made such a stupid mistake.
      I'm afraid what I have done has caused much inconvenience to you（带来不便）. Now something must be done to solve the problem because I understand you cherish the CD enormously. I can either send it to you by express mail or compensate（补偿、赔偿） you at a reasonable price. If you do not mind, l can bring it back to you next time I go to Canada.
      Please let me know which solution you prefer at your earliest convenience. I really hope you will accept my sincere apologies.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming

译精彩翻译: 亲爱的鲍勃：
      我写此信的目的是为了向你道歉。在离开加拿大时，我忘了把那盘甲壳虫乐队的CD还给你。走的时候太匆忙了,我把所有东西都塞到行李中，没有仔细检查。当时要是多加注意的话，就不会犯这种低级错误了。
      恐怕我所做的已经给你带来了很大不便。因为我知道你特别珍爱那盘CD,所以现在一定要想办法解决这个问题。我可以用快递寄给你,也可以按合理的价格赔偿你的损失，如果你不介意的话，我也可以在下次去加拿大的时候把它给你带回去。
      请在方便的时候尽快让我知道你倾向于哪一种解决方条。希望你能接受我真诚的道歉。
敬启
 李明